There is something amazing about your descriptions... maybe because we are related we like the same things:) However, this has the feeling of not being finished yet. Is it a fragment?
Yes, this is a fragment. There are more verses But I was not at all pleased with them and did not know how to round them out. Also I think I lacked a sense of where I wanted the poem to go. Thanks so much for taking time to post these and comment.
Will you post the rest of the poem when you get it finished? It has a very promising beginning. I especially like the description of the 'twisting songs of insects'.
There is something amazing about your descriptions... maybe because we are related we like the same things:) However, this has the feeling of not being finished yet. Is it a fragment?
ReplyDeleteYes, this is a fragment. There are more verses But I was not at all pleased with them and did not know how to round them out. Also I think I lacked a sense of where I wanted the poem to go. Thanks so much for taking time to post these and comment.
ReplyDeleteWill you post the rest of the poem when you get it finished? It has a very promising beginning. I especially like the description of the 'twisting songs of insects'.
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